Verelda Yin Wood

[Verelda Wood]

( VereldaYinWood )


( BEHINDTHESCREEN )

NAME: Lauren
NICKNAMES: Larry, Liana, Bradi has this special nickname for me but I can't pronounce it.
AGE: 13
GENDER: Female
BIRTH: February 28

( THEBASICS )

NAME: Verelda Yin Wood
NICKNAMES: Vel
AGE: 17
GENDER: Female
BIRTH: February 28
SCHOOL: Fallenhigh is a school for'special kids' Her father knew of her stealing ability and sent her there. Verelda doesn't know of it. But she gets the hint when all of the other kids have these weird powers. Since she is 17, she would be a junior.
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: STRAIGHT.

( THEAPPEARANCE )

FACE:Chelsea Staub
HEIGHT: 5 feet and 7 inches
WEIGHT: 120
HAIR&EYE COLOR: Blonde hair thay is about 3-5 inches. Wavy and curly. Mud brown eyes.
DISTINGUISHING FEATURES: Birthmark on her neck. Looks like a scar but its not.

( THEPERSONALITY )

• Verelda is very talkative. She just loves to talk. She found that out when she turned 12. She just started talking and people started to like her. Its really a long story.
• Verelda is very sneaky. Sometimes, she can steal something of yours and you wouldn't know it.
• Verelda does not like to be messed with. She has a lot of friends but if you make her mad. . . start running. She gets mad by the simplest things. Like when she gets caught when she steals. Or when you back talk her. Only her step-father can do that. Or if you spread rumors about her. She gets even with you. Or if you take her stuff. She doesn't like that.
• Verelda is an only child. At least she thinks. She has heard that she has a younger sister that is about 2 years of difference. She only heard about it of her step-father. Her father knew about it because of the teacher that worked at the orphanage. The teacher said that her younger sister was adopted by another rich family. We don't really know about them.
• Vererlda's step-father is a rich man and they care for each other like father/daughter. Why? Because he has always treated her like one. He taught her ways of getting out of things and fighting. He does nearly everything with her. They cherish each moment with each other. She cares for other people. If she likes them. If she doesn't like you then your basically her enemy. So, try to be on her good side. Besides cops. She hates them when she gets caught by them. Shes only been caught 2. One when she was trying to steal from a famous jewelry store. And the other. . . haha, she stole a car. . . and started speeding and she didn't have drivers license. Its quite funny actually.
LIKES: Sneaking, step-father, running, jumping.
DISLIKES: Snobs, bossy people, being mad, being caught,
STRENGTHS: Sneaking, running, jumping.
WEAKNESSES: Being caught, being mad, bosses.

( THEHISTORY )

• Verelda was adopted at the age of 4. Her step-father told her when she was 10. She has accepted it and moves on.
• Verelda is a burglar but becomes a supervillian. How? Let's just say, one day, she stole something very valuable and a supervillian saw her. Verelda has always known about her abilitys. At least since she was 14. She found out when she saw something she liked and stole it and no one knew. So, she uses her abilitys wisely.
• Verelda's family is rich. Her family is rich because of her step-father, Gerald. He is a successful banker and earns a lot of money.
• Verelda is an only child until she learns about her younger sister. She learns about her by going to her home and trying to steal something. She immediately recognizes the girl. At least she thinks. Her younger sister is a thief as well and is 2 years apart. Her sister also recognizes her too.
• Verelda is very popular. She's quite a talkative girl. When she turned about 12, she just started talking and everyone was interested. She always knows how to keep something alive.
PARENTS: Gerald Wood/36/Banker/Step-father/Alive
SIBLINGS: Levada Jin/15/Thief/Sister
OTHER FAMILY: Doesn't know.

( &ETCETERA )

ROLEPLAY SAMPLE: "I walked into a house, trying to find something worth stealing. I did find something. A diamond necklace. I quickly took it but alarms went off. A little girl came that looked exactly liked me. I couldn't help but stare at her. She was staring at me too. The police came and I ran out. Who was that girl? Was she my long lost sister?"
ANYTHING ELSE?: "I know I'm rich. But I still steal.

[Toralee]

DENIED;;
I'm sorry to have to say this Lauren - to deny your app, but you filled a few things out wrong and this isn't exactly the most acceptable application. First of all, in the very first section that is about you as the roleplayer, you need to change what you put as Lauren: to NAME: Lauren. Second of all, you need to be more specific on that school because that confused me. Fallenhigh? Is that supposed to be the name of the school? If so, what grade would she be in? Since she is 17, she'd more than likely be a junior to be senior or a senior if she was in school. Third of all, in the appearance section - you need to put her weight, you need to describe her hair more thoroughly - length, style (wavy, curly, straight, etc?) - and if able, something about her eyes. Are they just plain blue? Dark blue? Light blue? Some odd, bright blue? And also, you need to describe the birthmark or at least put where it is. Unless it's an odd place...but even then, mention that it's an odd place. Fourthly, you need to put more detail in her history. I also noticed that you put some stuff in personality that was supposed to be in history - the first bullet and possibly the fifth one. She cares about her step-father, I get that - but what of it? Is she caring to others at all? Elaborate more on that. Now, going back to her history, you need to be more descriptive. When was Verelda adopted? How is she a a supervillain - a super-powered being that is for the dark side? When did she find out about her abilities? Any particular reason her family is rich? Verelda would have believed she was an only child until she found out about her younger sister - so when did she find out about her younger sister? I get that Verelda is popular - how did she become popular? When did it really become apparent that she was? And don't give me an answer to that as 'she just always was'. No one just starts out like that - you should know this.

Fix all of these aspects of your application and I'll consider approving it. As far as I'm concerned though, this app is currently DENIED.

[Toralee]

I'm sorry to do this again, but everything is fine but the personality bullets. You're making them history - not about her personality. So far, only the 2nd and 3rd bullets in personality are acceptable. Use the other 3 to say how she reacts to certain things, what kind of things sadden and anger her and how she reacts. That's all I ask.

[Toralee]

I THINK I'LL JUST ACCEPT IT;;
Honestly, I think this might just be as good as you'll be able to do. The personality is still slightly like the history, but I'll just accept it to get it over with. Go post in the face claim, who plays who, and then you can start roleplaying.